I hope they bring the killer to justice and I hope the puke is still looking behind his back everywhere he goes. I remember Laney very fondly. She was always smiling, we shared the same name... sorta.

Great story.... once I re-read it a few times since its very badly written. Seriously, who set up the document formatting to make every sentence a paragraph? And you have "quotes" where no one was being spoken to or referenced.